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Soothing Wind Haiku
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Soothing Wind Haiku |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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Touching me tender~ Not a trace of its presence~ Except dancing leaves |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
comments please  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Kaile~ this is very soothing, a delightful little HaikuTracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Very nice indeed! well done.Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Kaile, How about simply pleasing to the soul. Love, Cerenity |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
You sure there's no trace of it's presence except dancing leaves?? What about the ruffled hair? Or that tiny dust particle that got into your eye? _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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