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Strings of paradox
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Strings of paradox |
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Ixtab Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 105MEXICAlpan de las tunas |
I woke up, red dawn sun feasted upon my night-sweat her breath crawled her eyes swept good morning. I came back, red midnight moon pity her brothers on Earth her body , stale her thunderous snoring good night I come to light then submerge into night I walk the path of life,routine yet a path that leads to unknown I live, because i´ll die I think, because i am irational nothing would be without it's inverted reflection when we stop we really start death is a lie say my brothers from across time before America (the continent) was raped and their memory virtualy erased life is more than what we see say my sisters that dwell at night some call them stars i call them teachers. good morning my love good night my hate when we start we really stop |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ixtab~ An absolutely remarkable piece of writing. Spell-binding, somewhat paradoxical, intriguing and thought-provoking. I'm fascinated with this thought process. Deeply satisfying. Thank you for sharing it. I've read it several times and will do so again. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Ixtab Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 105MEXICAlpan de las tunas |
Thanx for reading and for your kind review. I tried to describe, (in a little criptical way i accept)something very peculiar about human nature, our changable desires our different feelings for the same object, even during the same day. I´m sorry that i cant reply to no other posts,even when i´ve read so much valuable stuff in this site. unfortunately my access to internet is quite limited, so i usually take advantage of the little time i have in here to read rather than post. Anyway, thanx again............... "en el centro del lago de la luna, casi siempre hay una respuesta, solo hay que saber cual es la pregunta correcta", Jorge Reyes. |
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