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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida 
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Hold me dear, show me love Endure with me the trials Laugh with me, cry with me Pace with me the miles Mingle in life, in friendship true Ever bound to bridge the gap Lost in days’ to do’s and now’s Or in each other’s arms enwrapped Value my mind as I do yours Enjoy our ‘moments’ and ‘times’ Ageless years, a joint life in love Growing closer as we climb Atop a peak that we’ll call ‘Us’ In love with loving each other true Never betraying our hearts’ trust May I never be too busy to help another's load, Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed. --Author Unknown |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Sigh... *swoon, thud*  You've a penchant for passion m'friend. Your pen bleeds romance without the "ick." And to bone it all up in an acrostic... Smile!! An LOVE the last line... gets me right here! [This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 04-17-2000).] |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Earth to Mike, come In Mike... Ahem... O.k., I'm back now, Wow. The emotion is dripping off my screen as I read this one. The yearning to love again and love "true" is something we definately share, as well as the trepidition of opening up and trusting again. I'm with Chris here: Swoooooon!!! Michael |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Very nice job with this Acrostic (and it rhymes). Excellent work Satiate! A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Great acrostic |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Satiate~ This is a lovely acrostic. Really a nice job. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Cassanova Junior Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 39Turlock, Ca. |
WOW! This is AMAZING!!! Ok Satiate, where do I stand in line??? |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Beautiful, satiate.......... |
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