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kaile
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0 posted 2000-04-20 03:16 AM


My deep painful wounds~
My pup's tail snipped off~
Sad parallel fates

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netswan
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1 posted 2000-04-20 04:01 AM


Interesting way to express this sad
thing, Kaile.  Thanks for coming
to the challenge well met.

Thank you
netswam

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Back to the top cause this topic is so important

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3 posted 2000-04-20 05:37 PM


A lot of sadness in these few very well~placed words.

~ Claire

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4 posted 2000-04-21 07:16 AM


glad that you find it interesting,netswan

thanx jeffrey for your kind gesture  ")

thanx,Claire for your first-rate compliment ")

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5 posted 2001-12-05 01:00 PM


Ouch!! These wounds might not only be physical wounds... It sure does hurt bad inside too! And it's so cruel to both the child and that poor little pup! I'm against child and animal abuse... hmmph!  

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