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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley) [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 06-01-2000).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
APPLAUDING this smooth ocean stream with underlying currents with no beginning and no end. Classic Lucky, but even better. It's an amazing piece you've created, my friend, and it will be read here many times over Superb writing! LIz |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky Dale Gwaltney~ This is awesome. Such an aesthetic look at the world under the sea. Of course my FAVORITE line was - 'like the great weeping willow in early spiritual winds' Go figure !  You are the magic man ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
There is another world within the sea...so facinating and beautiful and yes, alien. Thanks for the scuba's look. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Forgot to meantion that I loved the title and the presentation was excellent Liz |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Well, It was about 30 minutes in the writing and I wasn't so sure... But I'm honored Liz, And Marge... is there a lack of Willows in all those Palms down on the third coast..? And Martie... your work too is quite mystique. thank you all so much. (Lucky) Dale |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dale~ couldn't help myself  had to replyI love the sea and you have pictured a most wonderful and exquisite world for which I'm in awe of. Such beauty there lies beneath the sea and yet also danger, this is very well written and expressed. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
All right Tracie, You cuaght me lookin' darn... your a scoundrel, maybe I am too. Thank you very much... And please always forgive me if I am wrong. Much love, (Lucky) Dale |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful imagery and so descriptive Lucky ... I can still picture the undulating undercurrents swaying the hands of coral to and fro ... beautifully written, thanks for the picture! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Lucky, Enjoyed the trip so much, never been down below until now, thanks so much for taking me. WONDERFUL Love Cerenity |
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