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The Cure
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The Cure |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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The Cure I think a lot these days At night I lie awake My memory replays every single mistake I wish i could have been your everything and more I missed my chance again I’ve little to live for If you could only see The way I’m so unsure I know you'd set me free I know you hold the cure |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
You can't change the past, so don't regret it so much. You should tell this girl how you feel, and stop regretting it. That would be "The cure" "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Thanks for replying LB i guess im starting to fall off with my writing I dont hear from anyone anymore and maybe your right But it cant change things |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
Kev, never give up on love, because love will never give up on you... you never know when you think its alll done and over with that it could be and maybe was there all along....  shan ps. this is one of the sweetest things i have read in a long time. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I think your writing is every bit as it ever was, and believe me it was always excellent. Perhaps it is all in the timing. As it is in relationship's my friend. Marina |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
There is a saying If you love something set it free if is truely yours it will return. Keep your chin up my young friend |
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sweetea Junior Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 12NE |
What Spiked has quoted is so true and I speak from personal experience. Do not let past relationships influence future ones. Keep your spirits high. [This message has been edited by sweetea (edited 05-31-2000).] |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Kevin, don't be sad. "My memory replays every single mistake"; Tonight play the good memories, the happy times, reflect on the positives. Compare these times to now, what's changed, you? her? Don't live in fear of holding onto her, oh, darn, I could write a book. I agree with everyone above. Marcy |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Hiya Kevin. There was a time in my life when I used to look back at all the decisions I'd made in my life, all the mistakes, all those odd turns of fate, wondering "what would have happened if...?" and regretting a lot of those decisions. As I got older though, new opportunities presented themselves, new chances not to make a mistake (or new chances TO make a mistake  ) At some stage, I realized that without those mistakes, quirks of fate, whatever, I wouldn't be who I am, where I am or what I am today. So, look forward to the future and use your experiences wisely Best wishes, Eric. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Hey Kevin, glad to see your stuff back, this is great. Pure Kevin as I see it.... you should repost some of your old stuff, for all these new commers here.... What was that one about into the black or well I don't remember.. anyway new or old their very cool Parker |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
So sad for such a young man, Kevin. Don't let the writing fall off, it doesn't matter what others think about it, it only matters what YOU think! And it's as good as ever, just kind of sad for one with so much ahead of him! Corinne |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Soft and touching...I also have a special one that I adore...she holds the key to her heart...I can only be myself and hope for the cure. James |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Thank you guys, to recieve this kind of response after watching my poem slide down the list untouched was very gratifying, Shan, you know i hang on your every word, so just hearing from you is sweet =) Mar, i guess you were right, on both counts Spiked, Letting go aint easy St, I think subconciously we always do Good advice crem, will do wise words eric, thanks, comforting =) Maybe I will hal, and youll be the first to her about it =) Cornnie, emotions know no age, and unfortunately for me, no mercy either =) Glad ya liked it jmlee =) |
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