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Cerenity
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Escondido-California

0 posted 2000-05-29 01:28 PM



Palette Of My Mind


On the palette of my mind
resides a treasure throve of dreams,
each one brilliantly colored
to satisfy my ultimate desires.

Giving motion to a dream
is to have the ability to see it in all
of it’s many dimensions, and
to believe in it’s realities.

Dreams being a fabrication
of our hearts most wanted desires
makes them have an effect on
our soul and gives it power, and
to act on these gut feelings
brings them forth.

The color or brilliance of
each that make their way to reality
depends solely on us and how
much we desire to put in to them and
the foundations they rest upon.

A flourishing soul is one
that has enjoyed the dreams of it’s
heart, and thus painting the
world in brightly colored master
pieces of art.


Dreams come true no
matter its creator is in its self
a miracle to the beholder,
and the one that shares his dreams
with others a painter of
reality.

I with my many dreams
hope to paint the world with love
and share the many brilliant
colors of my affections with all that
may cross my path through life.

For the pallet of my mind
resides a treasure throve of dreams.


By,   Cerenity


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Sven
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1 posted 2000-05-29 01:30 PM


Cerenity,
         you already have my friend. . . and you will continue to do so as long as your palette is filled with colors of love such as this. . .

Wonderful poem my friend. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
2 posted 2000-05-29 01:30 PM


Cerenity,

Lovely thoughts, a work of art, particularly...

I with my many dreams
hope to paint the world with love
and share the many brilliant
colors of my affections with all that
may cross my path through life.

For the pallet of my mind
resides a treasure throve of dreams.


Regards,
Sudhir.



 Hey you, out there in the cold,
Getting lonely, getting old, can you feel me?
Hey you, standing in the aisle,
With itchy feet and fading smile, can you feel me?
Hey you, don't help them to bury the light.
Don't give in without a fight.
Hey you, out there on your own,
Sitting naked by the phone, would you touch me?
Hey you, with your ear against the wall,
Waiting for someone to call out, would you touch me?
Hey you, would you help me to carry the stone?
Open your heart, I'm coming home....

by Roger Waters (Pink Floyd) - The Wall

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-05-29 01:32 PM




your mind paints a lovely vision Cerenity.
this is EXCELLENT...
love the way your mind works *smile*
take care, jm


 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~



Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2000-05-29 01:33 PM


Cerenity, my dear friend~
I would think the colors
of which you speak
are written with colors
oh, so deep
Colors of a rainbow-hue
from the palette of a heart
that is uniquely you !

Beautiful thoughts, sweet one.
Love you~
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
5 posted 2000-05-29 01:46 PM


I am feeling very wonderfully RED right now from all of your wonderful thoughts.

Thank you much,

Love,  Cernity

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
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ireland
6 posted 2000-05-29 04:08 PM


Dreams being a fabrication
of our hearts most wanted desires
makes them have an effect on
our soul and gives it power, and
to act on these gut feelings
brings them forth.

a wonderful and beautiful poem. very colourful.

 ------------------------
"Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? "
Douglas Adams.

"Here chewing your tail is joy"

Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Do not listen to a word I say
Just listen to what I can keep silent"

Nicky Wire


Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
7 posted 2000-05-29 05:23 PM


This is a wonderful self portrait, perfect in every way
And I'm pleased to have such a beautiful friend
Liz

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
8 posted 2000-05-29 08:20 PM


Hi Brian,
Thank you color makes the world more intresting don't you think.

Hi Liz,
What a wonderful complement Liz, some times I think I am trying to convince myself through my poetry how to understand what I have in my life, because alot of my poetry seems to be teaching or explaining rather than the telling of. Sometimes I fail to see the wealth or beauty beyond the hurtals and need to reasure myself that life is worth all of the jumps and trenches I must go through. And I want so to paint the world with the beauty God intended for it to look like, maybe it is catchy and everybody will start to be paiters HA!

Love,  Cerenity


Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
9 posted 2000-05-29 09:26 PM


What a great title! I like the poem very much, and the title is what drew me in..  
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