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eyesplus2 Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 163australia |
A heart beats strong and true more powerful than the strongest hurt yet able to be broken with a single look A touch giving warmth and joy yet able to be cold and aloof A smile able to stop the saddest tears yet the lack of one able to crush all life from you A word giving all meaning to two becoming one The lack of words cutting all the way to the bone A heart beats all for you I want to touch you for ever and a day more I smile whenever I see you in my heart The words I say will let me become one with you..I Love you today, tomorrow, and yesterday...... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Lovely poem EyesPlus. I enjoyed the way you created the "hot" and "cold" mix of feelings. Nicely done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eyes+2~ 'A heart beats all for you I want to touch you forever and a day more' My sentiments - EXACTLY ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
A smile able to stop the saddest tears yet the lack of one able to crush all life from you A word giving all meaning to two becoming one The lack of words cutting all the way to the bone loved those images. I enjoyed your poem wonderful constrast of emotions. ------------------------ "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams. "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Do not listen to a word I say Just listen to what I can keep silent" Nicky Wire |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Simply exquisite the verse that captured me was ~ A word giving all meaning to two becoming one The lack of words cutting all the way to the bone ~ Eyes, I enjoyed this very much!  Coco |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Liked the contrasts here. Corinne |
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