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Lone Ranger
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since 2000-04-16
Posts 92
Salvador , Bahia , Brazil

0 posted 2000-05-28 07:38 PM


I have a warn to give
For those who are still willing to live
Don't get caught in this delusion
For I have come to a conclusion
That life is not fair
And I believe you'll also bare
Life wears disguises
And so in most of the crisis
We are blind
Only trying to find
A sparkle of hope...

I've been tricked many times
But I've committed no crimes
So give me one reason
For life to do this treason
Maybe I have to fight
To get what is mine by right
But I don't understand
Help me comprehend
Why...

I've tried many times, and ways
But my conclusion stays
For I am no fool
I'm just following a clue
So eventually I'll find my way
But for now that's all I have to say
In this Sunday afternoon...



 "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free
It was always thus and always thus will be"
Prof. Keating
Dead Poets Society

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whipsnade
Junior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 40

1 posted 2000-05-28 08:51 PM


Lone Ranger
  Don't despair,we've all been there,, when you sort it out,,, the bottom bottom  bottom  bottom bottom line is simply ,,,,,
     "love"

             Ricardo

Lone Ranger
Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92
Salvador , Bahia , Brazil
2 posted 2000-05-28 09:56 PM


Ricardo...
Hey! are you brazillian?
Well, anyway thanks for your kind words...

 "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free
It was always thus and always thus will be"
Prof. Keating
Dead Poets Society

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