Open Poetry #7 |
~*"Liberation" Senryu*~ |
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~*"Liberation" Senryu*~ 5-7-5 Knowledge and kindness the keys to liberation open life's gold doors By Melissa Honeybee [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 05-15-2000).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
WOW that was profound and beautiful. Thank you, wise and honorable sensei. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Brian~ Thank you so much for the compliment, you had me laughing at the sensei part, I only wish LOL thanks again though Why don't you try to write senryus or haikus, I am sure that you would be brilliant at them, and I, of course would be first in line to reply! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Melissa! Denise |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent Melissa. . . *bowing* Profound and wise... ------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
you had me staring in awe at your little gem....simply beautiful |
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