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Honeybee
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0 posted 2000-05-15 04:46 PM



~*"Liberation" Senryu*~

5-7-5

Knowledge and kindness
the keys to liberation
open life's gold doors

By Melissa Honeybee



[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 05-15-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
brian madden
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1 posted 2000-05-15 04:57 PM


WOW that was profound and beautiful. Thank you, wise and honorable sensei.  
Honeybee
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2 posted 2000-05-15 05:06 PM


~Brian~

Thank you so much for the compliment, you had me laughing at the sensei part, I only wish LOL thanks again though   Why don't you try to write senryus or haikus, I am sure that you would be brilliant at them, and I, of course would be first in line to reply!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

Denise
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3 posted 2000-05-15 09:26 PM


This is lovely, Melissa!  

Denise

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4 posted 2000-05-15 10:28 PM


Excellent Melissa. . . *bowing*

Profound and wise...

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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5 posted 2000-05-28 09:56 PM


you had me staring in awe at your little gem....simply beautiful
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