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oldman
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since 2000-05-26
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0 posted 2000-05-28 01:43 PM


          A Mind Looking Back At Time

As I Set And Wonder Why
Why Did These Things Happen
Why Did We Let Are Love Leave

As I Set And Think of Yesterday
I See What Once Was So Beautiful
I Remember the Love I Had Always Wanted
I Remember It Coming to Me
I Was So Proud So Happy
I Had Finally Got What Most Just Dream Of

She Was Beautiful She Was All I Wanted
I Knew She Would Make My Life Full
I Could Feel Her Love for Me
I Could Feel My Love for Her

This Is A Love That Just Comes A Long
Once In A Life Time and it was mine
What More Could Any Man Desire

This Would Turn Out To Be A Lost Love
I Tried In Every Way to Show My Love
I Always Tried To Be There To Show My Love
The Love She Once Gave Me Seem To Be Fading

Her Love for Me and Herself Seem To Be Fading
Her Love for Life Seem To Be Fading
All I Could Do Was Pray But for What
She Closed Everyone out Would Not Let Me In

I Became So Frightened So Scared I knew
I Knew This Love Was Leaving Me
I Grew So Protective Of My Love
My Love for Her and Knowing I Was Loosing It

Finally the Day Came She Was Gone I Knew
I Knew I Had Lost This Love It Was Gone
I Knew My Life Had Ended I Knew All Was Gone
I knew then that My Life as I knew it was over

My Life Filled With So Much Pain So Much Hatred
My Life Was Filled With So Much Fear What to Do
My Heart had never felt so empty what to do

Time Has Gone Time Has Passed The Pain Is True
And Then Something Happened My Inner Soul Busted Out
My Body Busted out I Wanted To Hurt This Pain
The Pain Was the Love of My Life I Once Knew
I Wanted Even I wanted Revenge I Wanted Her
I Wanted Her To Feel Pain Like I had True Pain

Time, Time Has Since Passed And This Is Not Hate
I Just Realized It Is Still Love So Strong So True
I Just Realized What Now Will I Do I Still Love
I Just Realized I Still Love You Lady Why

A Person Has One True Love In A life Time
I Love Her with All My Heart All My Soul
I Hope From Time To Time She Remembers
The Touch the Truth I Love Her I Always Will

Looking Back In Time I Know Now the Truth
I always have and Always Will Love You
I Hope Looking Back She to Knows I Did
I Hope In Silent Moments She Remembers
I Hope She Thinks, Of the Little I love U’s
                                                             Written by R. Hataway


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Irie
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since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
1 posted 2000-05-29 02:22 AM


Welcome To Passions Oldman.
Sometimes life's little twists just aren't fair.
I'm glad you've found a way to express your feelings.I hopw you enjoy it here  

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

2 posted 2000-05-29 02:36 AM


"And Then Something Happened My Inner Soul Busted Out...I Wanted To Hurt This Pain..."

Poetic Surgery of the Soul.
I understand this, oldman, not always pretty, but such is life....

Welcome to the Forum.  I look forward to reading more.

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2000-05-29 08:11 AM


You've expressed your sorrow and pain well OldMan ... many wounds are healed through remembrance.  Welcome to Passions.

Best wishes,
/Kit

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