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The Tears upon your Cheek
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The Tears upon your Cheek |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London 
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The Tears upon your Cheek ~~~ In the heat of thoughtless anger some heartless words were said one glance revealed the tears upon your cheek Beneath a stubborn pride this foolish heart was fried when you turned and tossed your diamond to the unforgiving deep ~ The rolling waves in cycle were clawing at the sand without a word you turned and walked away This heart was crushed to gravel on the sand beside the sea with the sunlight gently passing from the darkness of the day ~ It could have been a picture for a future memory the setting suns' cascade with gentle breeze I sat there in the sand meer shell of hollow man with tears behind the huddle of my naked knobby knees ~ The seabirds distant call o're the crash of breaking surf my vision swirled as then to my surprise First a shadow ... just a blur ... then your hand upon my chin With your lips you brushed the tears from both my eyes ~~~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful poem ... I cheered at your superb ending Rex! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A great ending to this wonderful poem! I loved it.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sigh...beautiful Rex...ya make me laugh...ya make me cry...poetry man... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rex~ What a softie ! Awwwww ! So sweet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I definately did not expect that ending my friend. With the diamond thrown to the swirling deep...I thought it was all lost for sure. Well done!  |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Cheers to you too Kit ... thankyou Poet deVine ... thankyou your approval means a lot to me serenity ... they sometimes go hand in hand ... don't they? Thankyou Marge ... thankyou ... I really am a softy Marilyn ... thankyou ... and you know ... you may not see as much of the old me ... now that I see that people like my more serious writings ... I didn't think they would |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
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