Open Poetry #7 |
Mysteries |
shilpi Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 73 |
Mysteries .....yes, thats what you are to me All along I've known you so well Yet, with each passing heartbeat I feel there is more left to know Why is it that my heart skips a beat Each time I think of you ? What about that ocean warmth of contentment That lushes around me when you hold me ? The hundred different paths my emotions follow At the sound of your name on my lips And over a hundred more of your mischeivious gleams The numerous ways you make me feel immensely beautiful It will always remain a mystery How,even in your deepest silence, I hear the many ways You tell that you love me But the greatest mystery of all is that...... You & I are not two realities But one truth .....As vast as the desert sand dunes And as mysterious as the desert mirages I would rather spend my entire lifetime Unravelling your mysteries..... Than be with someone predictable. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"But the greatest mystery of all is that...... You & I are not two realities But one truth" Wonderful poem Shilpi ... I particularly liked the power in the line above. Well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Excellent words, nice sentiments, shilpi... I am glad I read this one... Regards, sudhir Life is like a painting, That in an art gallery is left hanging, Though many come just to look at it, A very few actually come to enjoy it. |
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shilpi Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 73 |
Thankyou for reading it and posting your response, Kit shilpi |
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shilpi Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 73 |
.....and I appreciate your words, Sudhir !! Its a pleasure to read your response....well, not as much as your poems, though !! shilpi |
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