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Two Lovers Met
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Two Lovers Met |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Two Lovers Met Two lovers met one summer night Enchantment filled this tender sight They came to meet as in a dream As I sat still beside the stream A little moonbeam softly dropped On whispering stream and there it stopped And in contentment stayed to rest Upon the water’s gentle crest The water murmured out of love And only I and stars above Were witness to the splendor there This tender meeting of the lovely pair Elizabeth Santos |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Elizabeth~ What a joyful little poem. I just love it. Your muses are a happy bunch this day ! Great big hugs of delight ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written. Such a nice flow and sentiment. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Elizabeth,...how lovely a little poem you have here. Such a nice one to read. It put a soft smile on my face and a calm and gentle feeling inside. Thank you mam. *Peace. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Elizabeth, what a Joy it is to read your poetry! Thank you.  Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This just flowed with gentle romanticism ... wonderful Elizabeth! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
wow! Kathleen indy31_99@yahoo.com |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Elizabeth, I agree qwith therest, this is very gentle and sweet. I liked it. David2 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Superb Liz, I couldn't have said it better myself. . . Just wonderful. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Everyone's comment is exactly the same, so I can give a big collective thank you to all you romantic souls. I appreciate the comments Liz |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz--here's an added "sigh" from me. |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
*sigh and a smile* oooh, so lovely...I could picture this beautifully. *Krista Knutson* ~The darkest midnight is only a prelude to the most enrapturing dawn~ |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Hey Liz! What the heck have you been smokin'? Can I get some of that? LOL Lovely writing Liz, Beautifully done All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Alina Le Ann Junior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 40INDIANA |
This is very picture perfect! I look forward to reading more of your poems! Alina Le Ann |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you all, each and every one, for your comments to this little poem Liz |
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