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Lorraine Nisbet
Member

since 2000-05-18

Posts 218
Jersey City, NJ USA

0 posted 2000-05-27 11:15 PM

Arrow Of Love

My name is cupid
my arrow's in flight
my missle of love
will reach two people tonight.
My weapon returns
with two names
I know they will never
be the same.
When I see them smile
my heart delights
to see their eyes sparkle
with loves flight.
For they will fly
ever so high
their hearts will reach
up to the sky.
They will soar forever
it will only feel like a day
because it is true love
their love will stay.
My mission is accomplished
so I must go
to find two more special people
and let my arrow flow.

~Lorraine Nisbet~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-05-27 11:26 PM

Lorraine~
Well, how cute !
You little Cupid, you !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

2 posted 2000-05-28 05:44 AM

Cupid's arrow strikes, my patience is wearing thin...

Lorraine, nice poem, this is for sure...

regards, sudhir

Life is like a painting,
That in an art gallery is left hanging,
Though many come just to look at it,
A very few actually come to enjoy it.

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2000-05-28 08:27 AM

This was charming Lorraine ... you never know where he'll strike! Nice work ...

Best wishes,
/Kit

Lorraine Nisbet
Member

since 2000-05-18

Posts 218
Jersey City, NJ USA

4 posted 2000-05-28 03:38 PM

Hi, Marge, sudhir and Kit!

I must say I had the most fun writing this piece. Thank you all for the nice replies.

~Lorraine

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2000-05-28 04:19 PM

I hope your friend cupid could shoot a few arrows towards me and Lena...and please don't miss her cause you already got me cupid. James

Lorraine Nisbet
Member

since 2000-05-18

Posts 218
Jersey City, NJ USA

6 posted 2000-05-29 08:23 PM

James,

I put in a few good words to my friend cupid for you...good luck.

~Lorraine

A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur

Bessy41
Junior Member

since 2000-04-25

Posts 12

7 posted 2000-05-29 08:27 PM

I like the style, very imagintive and creative!!

)~

Lorraine Nisbet
Member

since 2000-05-18

Posts 218
Jersey City, NJ USA

8 posted 2000-05-30 06:30 PM

Hi, Bessy!

Happy to meet you. You are too kind. I thank you very much.

~Lorraine

A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur

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