Please Daddy(informal cinquain)

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Please Daddy(informal cinquain)

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

0 posted 2000-04-20 12:17 PM

Don't
hit me
with that belt!!
I'll be good,daddy
OUCH!!!

if you are interested to write an informal cinquain,pls refer to my post in the corner pub"A Tribute to passionate poets and a cinquain challenge"

netswan
Senior Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 1369
Washington

1 posted 2000-04-20 02:36 AM

LOL being good never worked, don't you
know it? This is good.
Thanks
netswan

Rose Petal
Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 52
WVa. USA

2 posted 2000-04-20 03:49 AM

I was whipped with a belt many times!!

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

3 posted 2001-12-05 12:54 PM

Oh... this is so sad!! I think belting is a very harsh way to punish a kid. A thin cane with a quick flick of the wrist produces such pain, let alone a belt!

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Florence

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