Open Poetry #7 |
The Perfect Girl |
Rhavin Junior Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 28 |
"For Benna" I’ve never thought I would meet the perfect girl But God has brought her into my world When she smiles at me my soul melts inside Just for the chance to be near her I would die I can tell when I look at her, she is such a unique spirit When she speaks to me I can hardly bear it Because I’m nothing special, and I can’t compare But to dream about her, would I even dare I’ve always heard about a girl that one might meet The one that can make your heart instantly skip a beat I always thought that this tale was nonsense But I now know its true because the time that we’ve spent Now when I close my eyes I see her enchanting face The taste of her lips on mine is what I ask for when I pray I count down the minutes till I can be in her company again But I know how easily she can turn the heads of all the men So what can I do to set myself apart I guess I can show her that I have a very loving heart I’ve often been told that God has made a special someone for each But when I look at her she seems so far out of reach I don’t know how to make an impression on her that will last I want her to like me for me, so I won’t wear a mask I know that God has someone for me Now I think I have found her, but does she share the feeling Or am I just wishing for the impossible But this feeling inside is definitely unstoppable “God to this I pray to you” “Please let her feel the same way too” |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You have said it all so well...I hope all your prayers and desires come true. James |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~This is so precious and sweet. I too hope that all your prayers are answered my friend. Great post. *Peace. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Hi! Welcome to Passions! Hope you like it here. This was a beautiful poem full of your heart! Those are my favorite kind. I hope this girl you speak of realizes how you feel! Best of luck!! take care, Amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful and emotion-filled Rhavin ... I hope the recipient of your desire reciprocates. She would be lucky indeed to meet your heart. Welcome to Passions! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Hi, Rhavin! Such a sweet poem...Great job...Welcome to Passions. ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Welcome Rhavin. . . This poem was excellent!! A wonderful song showing your poetic soul. . . if it hasn't been shown to the object of your affection. . . make sure that she sees it!!! Excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Rhavin Junior Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 28 |
thanks everyone for the nice comments. And Sven I am scared to show it to the girl I wrote it about. I truly don't know if she feels the same way. |
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