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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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Drifting away [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 06-01-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is a treasure Lucky ... beautifully written, and brought a tear to my eye just reading. Lovely and heart-felt writing ... Best wishes, /Kit |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Thank you Kit, Just wanted to say I ckecked out your office... must say it's a LOT cleaner than ours. Good work... If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley) |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Lucky,...wow. This is a very emotionally powerful piece. Thank you for sharing it...it's such a heartfelt tribute. Give Rosemary a hug from me. Take care. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ What a sentimental softie you are. You've honored Rosemary and her parents with this lovely piece. You're a 'good' guy ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
lucky, you have the sweetest love, and those who have you in their lives, are blessed. Very powerful heart pull for me in your words. Hugs to you both! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Lucky this poem touches me in more ways than I could express here. what a truly amazing poem this is, not only for its words, but the love and tribute behind it ... and the kind soul and heart that shine in it. 50 years...now thats amazing take care, jm Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A beautiful and heartfelt tribute Lucky...Well Done.  Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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