Open Poetry #7 |
Missing You |
Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Yet another dear friend has moved away < !signature-->And I think of her most every day Her old house at times I drive by I find myself sometimes stopping to say Hi Then I remember it’s no longer her place I drive away with a smile on my face Thinking of how it used to be And how she’s still a good friend to me Oh how I wish she were still here Though she will never move back I fear She’s happy now at her new abode Down at the end of that long country road I’m happy for her as a friend should be And someday soon her new place I’ll go see But until that day I want her to know That I’m thinking of her and miss her so Dedicated to Deb (Note to self: If I could learn how to spell I could quit editing my messages) LOL ~Sheri [This message has been edited by Irie (edited 05-26-2000).] |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
LOL Irie! Beautiful poem. If I could learn to stop being in such a hurry I wouldn't have to edit anything. hehe Wonderful touching tribute to your friend! ~netswan |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Irie ... I've just moved myself, and it's so odd to think of someone else in the place we "used to call home". Lovely poem, and best wishes to you and your friend. /Kit |
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aleisha Junior Member
since 2000-05-04
Posts 10 |
Very good Irie. I hope Deb reads it. Good job again my best friend! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh Irie,..send this to her,..she'll cherish it. Such a nicely written sentiment. *Take care. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Netswan... Just another one of my problems. Always in a hurry! Kit... Very odd thing isn't it. Strange to see someone else there. Aleisha... She has read it my best friend! SpitFire... Ditto above. Thank you all for your nice replies! I'm glad you enjoyed! ~Sheri |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Hey Sheri, this is very good. . . a wonderful tribute to your friend. . . we should all have someone that close to us. . . Excellent my friend. . . And don't worry, I won't tell them about your spelling if you won't!!! ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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shilpi Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 73 |
I hope you see your friend very soon, not to renew your friendship but to enhance it !! Your feelings were expressed very well, by the time i reached the last line, I felt like one my friends was leaving !! shilpi |
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