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Goodbye... |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Hi...I'm new in Open, but I got a suggestion a few months back to post this in herr....I hope you like it  GoodbyeGoodbye dear place I've come to know. Goodbye youth of summer and snow. Goodbye fears in hidden fury. Goodbye seven years gone by in a hurry. Goodbye all unsolved lies. Goodbye all broken family ties. Goodbye you old wicked winding road. Goodbye every stroy never told. Goodbye hatred, hurt, and pain. Goodbye dreams never attained. Goodbye my prison with four standing walls. Goodbye life's rises and all it's falls. Goodbye perplexity in all different forms. Goodbye childish fears of thunderstorms. Goodbye days with my lemonade stand. Goodbye life with no demand. Goodbye worries in a dusty haze. Goodbye young struggle through a hamster's maze. Goodbye each forgotten tear. Goodbye problems that now seem mere. Goodbye love's last command. Goodbye things I could never understand. Goodbye both friend and cowardly foe. Goodbye each final Saturday show. Goodbye blue demon finally unveiled. Tomorrow is a new day to be shared [This message has been edited by Ron (06-25-2011 10:02 AM).] |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've said your good-byes with conviction Salma. Here's to looking forward to new beginnings and fresh tomorrows ... refreshing and positive poem, nicely done. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
More than a mere poetic swan song, this piece creates a lovely literary window toward a new beginning. Wonderful writing! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
love these lines... "Goodbye worries in a dusty haze. Goodbye young struggle through a hamster's maze." thanks for posting this... it delves into the struggles we all deal with but rises through the surface to let the past lie and grow enjoyed |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Thanks a lot for the replys...I'm really glad you enjoyed it "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders." |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Salooma~ HELLO WORLD ! We welcome you to Open ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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