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Open Poetry #7

Breathes An Opal Moon

Cassanova
Junior Member

since 2000-04-12

Posts 39
Turlock, Ca.

0 posted 2000-04-19 09:15 PM

Breathes An Opal Moon

take shelter
in hope
give cynicism
no power
for it feeds on fear
and reaps only that
which it is fed

~dream~
allow your subconcious to
guide you
down the paths
of your future
for
in those deep rooted recesses
lies truth
lies understanding

~love~
let the expanse
of your soul
be filled
with the joy
of caring
only we
can validate ourselves
but
what use validation
if it
is not shared

~laugh~
for with an open heart
comes the ability
the gift
of a smile

netswan
Senior Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 1369
Washington

1 posted 2000-04-19 09:24 PM

Aw, how heart warming -- this is really
an effective way to write a poem.
Different, and drew my eye.

netswan

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2000-04-19 10:31 PM

Wise words and message--great poem!

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2000-04-19 10:47 PM

Words from the wise...so so smart with a spoonful of mystic presence....lovely words voice lovely thought. Thanks m'friend.

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

4 posted 2000-04-19 10:58 PM

Powerful words here, and a strong message. Extremely well done, with a good format as an added bonus! Wonderful!

*Krista Knutson*

As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins.
~*Albert Schweitzer*~

mariee66
Senior Member

since 2000-01-30

Posts 596
Recess, OfYourMind

5 posted 2000-04-20 12:26 PM

Lovely thoughts~
And a great format~
Nice work~
Marie~

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

6 posted 2000-04-20 03:26 PM

Very very interesting! I quite like this poem, me thinks...
The first stanza really sticks it home, cynicism and fear...indeed. Then it just keeps gettin' sweeter an' sweeter! Left me with a smile!

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