Open Poetry #7 |
Together forever |
Angel`Fox Junior Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 32Ottawa, Ontario Canada |
Together forever I feel the love rushing into me Swelling my heart What you give me is pure What I give you is myself Wrap me up in your love Forever and ever I want to take my last breath With your lips on mine Press together forever My life started The day I meet you My heart never felts this way before You take my breath away Your word swims in my soul Your touch soft as a petal Your embrace oh so strong Was this ment to be? Did our souls finally meet? It was ment to be, you and me It is our destiny Lets start our life together Forever. @}>*+~^ Angel`Fox ^~+*<{@ {~._.~} _( Y )_ ()~*~() (_)-(_) "Love seeketh not itself to please Nor for itself hath any care, But for another gives its ease, And builds a heaven in hell's despair" |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Angel Fox! Denise |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"I want to take my last breath With your lips on mine" (loved that line) Such romance and promise of new love ... nicely done AngelFox! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
very nice ... and I wish you all the best Rex |
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Angel`Fox Junior Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 32Ottawa, Ontario Canada |
awww thank you all Nothing beats the feeling of Love!! @}>*+~^ Angel`Fox ^~+*<{@ {~._.~} _( Y )_ ()~*~() (_)-(_) "Love seeketh not itself to please Nor for itself hath any care, But for another gives its ease, And builds a heaven in hell's despair" |
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