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Angel`Fox
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since 2000-05-20
Posts 32
Ottawa, Ontario Canada

0 posted 2000-05-25 10:38 AM


Together forever

I feel the love rushing into me
Swelling my heart
What you give me is pure
What I give you is myself
Wrap me up in your love
Forever and ever
I want to take my last breath
With your lips on mine
Press together forever
My life started
The day I meet you
My heart never felts this way before
You take my breath away
Your word swims in my soul
Your touch soft as a petal
Your embrace oh so strong
Was this ment to be?
Did our souls finally meet?
It was ment to be, you and me
It is our destiny
Lets start our life together
Forever.



 @}>*+~^ Angel`Fox ^~+*<{@

{~._.~}
_( Y )_
()~*~()
(_)-(_)

"Love seeketh not itself to please
Nor for itself hath any care,
But for another gives its ease,
And builds a heaven in hell's despair"


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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-05-25 11:48 AM


Very beautiful, Angel Fox!  

Denise

Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2000-05-25 11:54 AM


"I want to take my last breath
With your lips on mine"

(loved that line)  Such romance and promise of new love ... nicely done AngelFox!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London
3 posted 2000-05-25 11:56 AM


very nice ... and I wish you all the best

Rex

Angel`Fox
Junior Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 32
Ottawa, Ontario Canada
4 posted 2000-05-25 04:18 PM


awww thank you all   Nothing beats the feeling of Love!!

 @}>*+~^ Angel`Fox ^~+*<{@

{~._.~}
_( Y )_
()~*~()
(_)-(_)

"Love seeketh not itself to please
Nor for itself hath any care,
But for another gives its ease,
And builds a heaven in hell's despair"


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