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But rain |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704
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I am but rain a sonnet of the sky you wander earthly life-dry alone await my fall I come I flight slip by and join the river’s flow it is not time you say for us and flowly I turn away a-ryhthmed undanced uncaught I cause hearts to grow become mist and wait for another to call me but not to catch my fall to keep rain always I will stay |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I read this twice Severn ... it had a mystical and enchanting flow ... lovely poem! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Severn, Enjoyed the read. *L* |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This read just like a soft summer rain---'a sonnet of the sky...'---how I like that... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh this is sadly-beautiful Soul-Sis. I am but rain a sonnet of the sky so soft and gentle yet sad. loved it  Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, very lovely, Kamla! Denise |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I love this, Kamla. You could never be just rain. You are a downpour, a storm, a deluge and, when I don't hear from you, you are mist.  |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
a lovely poem, touched with sadness like rain, for while the rain cleanses it some times arrives in an air of sadness. continue to rain down with your magically words of poetry. ------------------------ "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams. "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
If you are the rain, then you have been falling all around me today..and you sang me to sleep last night...I feel a lonliness in this lovely poem, Kamla...so sending hugs! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Kit - thankyou, second reads are a huge compliment. Sy - hey I thought you were on a boat, buddy! Thanks! Serenity - thankyou DA - thanks hon, ta muchly! Denisey - 'deer - hey you - at the time of writing that I was the one waiting to hear from YOU! HAHAHA. I shall come soon and pour on your roof yes? Thanks hon.  Brian - thankyou so much, that is just a beautiful thing to say. Martie - all hugs gratefully received my friend - and thankyou. K |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kammie~ S'cuse me ? Excuuuuuse me ! I think this is perhaps the prettiest pouring from your pen. 'and flowly I turn away' How utterly original and misty-eyed. I just LOVE the whole flow of it. Excuuuuuuuuse me ! This 'could' cause immediate poet-envy ... of which there is no cure. Sooooooo ... feed me more ... quickly ! ! Hey, girl .... Exquisite and uniquely YOU ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Kamla, this is truly delicate. . . just speaks from the heart and from the soul. . . and reads wonderfully out loud. . . Simply wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Lovely--- yes the rain "awakens" that ready to bloom-- "Or, like the thief of fire from heaven, |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
rain always I will stay You hon, are "but rain" which has fallen into "the" land and with the richness of "its" soil, you have "bloomed" Maree |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hah...looking back through here, and what do I find? My ultimate 'I feel sorry for myself' poem...ehehhehee |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a beautiful write, where have you been? |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
PoetFriendSevern what treasure do I find... Thank you very much4this enjoyed read2nite... Smiles2u *~coco~* |
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