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~Judgement~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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You don't know me, You don't know who I am < !signature-->I shall not be judged by you even though I can In my heart and soul I know who I am and you cannot change that You may think you can but the hat I wear is MY hat I am not perfect none of us are You sit and judge me from afar I won't be hurt or put off by what you say As I live to tell this tale for another day Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 05-25-2000).] |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Wonderful, Tracie - You go girl, wear that hat --) Great poem. ~netswan [This message has been edited by netswan (edited 05-25-2000).] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Thanks netswan I know it's short and not much at all but I had to let that out  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Yeah Tracie!!! That's the spirit! I think your poem is great....short and says it all! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Short and sweet, and well said Tracie. I've wanted to say this a few times myself ... thanks for putting it into words! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Hon .. whatever prompted it .. way to vent ! I love ya', hon ! *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Tracie,...glad to see your work again. Seems like it's been a while since you posted. This is a great piece!!! Strong words,...good for you. *Take care. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
So much said in so few words. Very well said Tracie. *hugs*  Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
beautifully said tracie ... from birth we start to develope individuality and for many it takes years of patience to learn to express our individuality ... lets not let anyone or anything spoil that Rex |
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FadingSun Member
since 2000-05-01
Posts 76Southern California |
Tracie, Your words are always so powerful, and continuously a treasure to hear (read) :0) I don't believe there's a soul in this forum, that has not once desired to release that particular frustration... and besides... I like your hat! Always, ~S |
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bad girl New Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 6 |
Short and Sweet! Very good job! Bad Girl  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
To all my friends at passions I'm so greatful for your comments but have come to the conclusion that this poem is a little too powerful and please I only hope that you can see that this was written because of something very hurtful that was said to me and I vented what I was feeling at the time through this poem. Thanks again Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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