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netswan
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since 2000-03-28
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0 posted 2000-05-25 05:28 AM


Daffodils


Soft plush daffodils
vibrant in sun color
waving gaily happily

fragrant and tantalizing
amidst grassy hills
brightly shining aglow

scintillating colorful orbs
thirstily drinking raindrops
proudly standing strong

against mountain backgrounds
daffodils hail triumphantly
splashing sunny gold

~netswan




 Teresa King
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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2000-05-25 05:55 AM


Lovely and picturesque Netswan .. I've been away for a few days so I haven't seen the challenge ... it appears to be no letter "e"???  That's a tough one! You met it beautifully!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Corazon
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since 2000-02-02
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2 posted 2000-05-25 09:33 AM


yep, this is a b*autiful pictur* you paint*d....lol I don't think I am quit* up to the chall*ng*...  
SpitFire
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3 posted 2000-05-25 09:40 AM


~Netswan,...you're brilliant!!!  This is lovely. *Peace.
Sudhir Iyer
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4 posted 2000-05-25 10:29 AM


All you 'E's move away, netswan has made you all history....  

Great work, netswan, right up there where you belong to the top...

Regards, sudhir.

 Life is like a painting,
That in an art gallery is left hanging,
Though many come just to look at it,
A very few actually come to enjoy it.

netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
5 posted 2000-05-25 03:45 PM


Kit - thank you - Kaile's Challenge is
any Poem - just no e's in it.  It was fun.
I am glad to have you - Thanks

Corazon, it was a lot easier than I thought
it would be, so get crackin' on one. Thanks

Spitfire - think I am going to make you
one of my favorite fans -- you are so bright and cheerful in your responses  

Sudhir - thank you - I appreciate your comments

brian madden
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ireland
6 posted 2000-05-25 04:05 PM


wow netswan every second word I seem to type has an e in it. SEE. It is quite difficult for me not to speak a sentence without the letter e in it.  . Well done, not only to meet a difficult challenge but you wrote a beautiful poem as well,

fragrant and tantalizing
amidst grassy hills
brightly shining aglow

scintillating colorful orbs
thirstily drinking raindrops
proudly standing strong

fantastic.

 ------------------------
"Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? "
Douglas Adams.

"Here chewing your tail is joy"

Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto



Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

7 posted 2000-05-26 01:05 AM


beautiful poem Swan and I can tell you had fun with this challenge as well.
wonderful colors and imagery in this.
take care, jm

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~



wayoutwalt
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8 posted 2000-05-26 01:07 AM


you did so well i wrote one bout noel
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