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Angelwings
Member

since 1999-08-27

Posts 222
IL, USA

0 posted 2000-05-25 12:17 PM

To reach out and feel you surrounding me
To feel my body enwrapped in you
Catching every last word
Holding it dearly to my heart
I strain to hear every sound
To feel every beat
To listen not with my ears but with my heart
To catch the meaning and understand
To take solitude in your meaning
The tone, the pitch, the sound
Ringing in my ears
Through my heart
And out of my mouth
Consoling my pain
Working through my anger
Taking away the loneliness
Taking away the tears
To reach out and feel you surrounding me
To feel my body enwrapped in you
Is truly my dream come true

netswan
Senior Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 1369
Washington

1 posted 2000-05-25 01:22 AM

Aw, how sweet, Angelwings - lovely
heartfelt poem

~netswan

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-05-25 09:07 AM

~Awww,...Angelwings this is perfect. "To listen not with my ears but with my heart",...if you can do this, you've truly found it. This is so sweet. *Peace.

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2000-05-25 09:10 AM

To be surrounded by such wondrous feelings Angelwings ... you are blessed. Lovely poem!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

4 posted 2000-05-25 09:15 AM

There is little that I know of that is more satisfying than to feel this kind of connection with someone you love...wonderful sentiment you've expressed here, Angelwings...thank you.

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

5 posted 2000-05-25 09:20 AM

Lovely...lovely...

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

6 posted 2000-05-25 10:35 AM

Very nice Angelwings

enjoyed the read.

Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

7 posted 2000-05-25 11:18 AM

You said it all in one breath. Very nice.
Melton

Angelwings
Member

since 1999-08-27

Posts 222
IL, USA

8 posted 2000-05-25 01:07 PM

Thank you everyone for reading my poem. It can be doubled both as love and passion. Thank you again and have a wonderful day of writing.

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