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Rocketman New Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 6 |
Oh you wiley woman you shaper of words You seek the setting sun and hold onto dreams feel the warmth upon your skin the soft touch of gentle breezes the earth turns it's wicked course stops for noone time is the enemy of love be joyful unto the Lord sing Him songs of praise this time is meant for reasons unknown this time is meant for Love |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
ok, I don't understand the wiley woman part...would like an explanation, but welcome anyway  don't mind my misunderstanding....keep writing |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"...oh you wiley woman, shaper of words". Now that is a description, isn't it? Wonderful line. Nice piece. Welcome. jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 05-24-2000).] |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Welcome to Passions Rocketman - Loved the start of this - but I got lost somewhere as to the meaning of the poem. Do explain what you are relating to we avid readers. ~netswan |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Very interesting read,great poem loved the images. Oh you wiley woman you shaper of words You seek the setting sun and hold onto dreams feel the warmth upon your skin the soft touch of gentle breezes the earth turns it's wicked course stops for noone time is the enemy of love fantastic. ------------------------ "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams. "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto |
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Rocketman New Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 6 |
Thank you all for responding to my work. I do have a lot to learn and nothing like the opinions of others to guide and inspire ones passion. Corazon - The wiley woman, shaper of words part is my sarcastic, yet affectionate way of describing my love who was proding me to write about how I feel about her. This was my response...all stemming from the "wiley woman" that jumped from my head to the page. We never have enough time for the one's we love. Thanks for reading and I look forward to your comments on other works of mine. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I think I'm a wiley woman, shaper of words! Welcome to the family..please check your email for a special message. I look forward to reading more from you..  |
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