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Mote Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 31 |
Angel O Angel bright upon this night splay thy Celestial wings, and up the sky flourish in flight away from terrestrial things. Depart again from this floor Earth from all its mingling tones- this humble place of your birth, that keeps your buried bones. So Free from all those habiliments that do weigh down souls to soil half-governed by nature's elements amassed in life's mortal coil. A body of energy to be sustained, so in tact to thy heavenly gild of such open-natured impulses now restrained with Angel Grace meted and willed A Superconscious haloed thrall of the all-lofty supernal strata of existence perfected where so absent are chanced elements to rattle thee above and out of reach from anything unexpected. Though by an inkling of inclination to former passions embraced your form leaned into temptation -perhaps a mask almost defaced You descended here shedding a tear softly down the brocaded sky the purest appearance showing fear but yet scarcely knowing why. Morbidly searching for a certain something beyond divinity, outside of the angel kingdom of noble suffering Alas perhaps the key to true love But your Master does bid thee back tonight, O save for your oblique side, Be Angel now as brave as thou art bright- leave it here in me to hide. Away to Divine Headquaters to reside high on those donated clouds above this- the feculant land of us purblind Gods who die- Return and find unblooming bliss. And beware if the darkling element is not dead That tossed thee like a helpless dart to risk that halo hovering over your head for a better one over your heart |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
What a magical, romantic, delightful poem, tis' so did touch thy heart, thy heart did flutter as wings of the angel spoken here!  WOW! breath taking and beautiful! Welcome to passions  |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
Wow~ What a beautiful poem. Truly is breathtaking. Thank you for sharing with us and welcome to passions. I hope to see more of your writings. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written. Enjoyed. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely poem. Welcome to the family, check your email for a special welcome.  |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Welcome to Passions, Mote! What a wonderful poem to start out with - I hope you will enjoy passions as much as I do! ~netswan |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful and flowing visions Mote ... I enjoyed this ... Welcome to Passions! Best wishes and hope to see more ... /Kit |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lovely!! Welcome to Passions, Mote! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You have talent, mote.... I look forward to reading more of your work... Welcome to our Passionate Abode...  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mote~ Welcome to our family of friends and poets. Amazing entrance ... 'to risk that halo hovering over your head for a better one over your heart' I like it ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Welcome, Mote Great first post...looking forward to reading more. ~Lorraine |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful poetry. Enjoyed reading very much. James |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Excellent poem Mote ... very thought-provoking ... I will watch for more, welcome to Passions! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Mote Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 31 |
Thank you all for warm welcome and kind comments. Mote |
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