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Promise of You |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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The air teems The clouds fill The rain falls it's very rhythm whispering the promise The night dark The stars twinkle The moon hidden ready to show the depth of the promise The sun glows The rays cascade The wind speaks in it's voice the words of the promise The heart beats The soul hears The body feels the promise of you Searching for a heart to call my home So glad that I found it in your own The promise of love The promise of life The promise of joy The promise. . . of you. . . -------------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Sven....when it comes to weaving the words you are one of the masters I think. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ Eternally romantic ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a beautiful poem....soooo romantic!! *sigh*!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This very soft and romantic Sven. After such a beautiful poem I would certainly make her keep her promise. After all...... A promise, is a promise. Marina |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Romance seems to be your middle name Sven, and once more, well done!!! ... Searching for a heart to call my home So glad that I found it in your own .... Regards, sudhir. Life is like a painting, That in an art gallery is left hanging, Though many come just to look at it, A very few actually come to enjoy it. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I will put this one back to the top..... I promise! Marina |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
You are such a romantic Sven, Beautiful!  Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, Good one, you keep getting better and better. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
BRAVO!!!! This is really good Sven! The promise of love, life and joy. You've painted a beautiful picture here!  ~Sheri |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Sven, this was done with beauty and romance, flowing from the heart in your pen. Very nice read. Parker |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Sven, Very romantic...and well done. ~Lorraine |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all my friends for your responses. . . it's nice to know that my writing makes you happy and that you enjoy it. . . Thank you again. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Beautiful poem! The writer shares The pen reply's The poet Sven posts a beautiful poem with promise |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I love reading your poems very much!!!!!! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Nice poem, Sven. Isn't it also a song? Perhaps you had some inspiration on this one... Great writing... Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful work Sven as always. I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sweet Sven You must be the most romantic person I know, you come up with these all the time. You must be so happy and lucky in life well I sure hope so anywayTracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . Insect, thank you for your poetic response vandana, I like reading your work also! LW, yes it is, but if you listen to it, you'll find that it has very little to do with this. . . Isis, thank you my friend. . . Tracie, thank you for your wonderful thought. . . and I am lucky to have friends like you and everyone here at Passions. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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