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spiked
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0 posted 2000-05-24 12:03 PM


The gentle taste of skin unfleshed
I see it rise before me
The beauty raised up from your breast
So much that it adorns thee

The chill I cause
With my hot breath
Send shivers down your spine
And leads to this unrest.

A sigh of exasperation
That need you feel so deep
You want me so inside you
So bad it makes you weep.

I’ve tangled with this image
It runs within my head
Contorts the peace within me
Much more that what I’ve said

So share this dream within me
Invade me as I sleep
Consume this wild desire
The nature of this beast


© Copyright 2000 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-05-24 07:34 AM


And if I could--
I'd dream inside you--
every moment count--
should you say "hush"
I'd silent blush--
at your command, I'd scream without....

forgive me, if it's fate, unkind..
forgive me love, if step behind...
and every simple thing that's new
is memory of loving you...

spiked
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2 posted 2000-05-24 07:40 AM


Thank you Serenity
serenity blaze
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3 posted 2000-05-25 11:54 AM


Oh, but no....you just won a free turn...spin again....
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