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RAM
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since 2000-03-24

Posts 153

0 posted 2000-05-19 01:44 PM

Mantra Transformed

Pulling you in
with each deep breath.
Slowly, I release
a sigh -
a sigh that is your name.

Feeling you flow
with each fresh pulse.
Softly, I whisper
in peace -
the peace that is your name.

Freely you stream
through each blessed cell.
Swiftly, I succumb
to rush -
a rush that lives your name...
Corinne.

© RAM 5/17/00

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

1 posted 2000-05-19 02:11 PM

That was beautiful, very tranquil. I am sure Corinne will be honoured by your mantra.

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

2 posted 2000-05-19 03:32 PM

Yepr! I echo brian totally. Beautifully penned.

Parker

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

3 posted 2000-05-19 06:50 PM

Oh, RAM, I'm speechless. Thank you
(blushing furiously).

Corinne

dhuron
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since 2000-03-19

Posts 476

4 posted 2000-05-19 06:58 PM

this was a wonderful poem..very peaceful and breathtaking...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2000-05-20 07:10 AM

RAM~
Tee - Hee
The *blush* becomes her, does it not?
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

LadySofia
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since 2000-05-16

Posts 238
FL., USA

6 posted 2000-05-20 08:01 AM

RAM my friend, what a compelling piece. Gives me shivers all over!

^_^ LadySofia

That time of year thou mayst in me behold, When yellow leaves, or none, or few, do hang, Upon those boughs which shake against the cold, Bare ruined choirs where late the sweet birds sang. In me thou see'st the twilight of such day, As after sunset fadeth in the west, Which by-and-by black night doth take away, Death's second self that seals up all in rest. In me thou see'st the glowing of such fire, That on the ashes of his youth doth lie, As the deathbed whereon it must expire, Consumed with that which it was nourished by. This thou perciev'st, which makes thy love more strong, To love that well which thou must leave ere long.
William Shakespeare

RAM
Member

since 2000-03-24

Posts 153

7 posted 2000-05-24 02:26 PM

thank you brian and Parker

de nada, Corinne. thank YOU

thanks, dhuron

Marge, that it does.

Thanks, LadySofia. shivers are good, especially when it's near 100 outside.

Rick

SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

8 posted 2000-05-24 03:05 PM

~RAM,...oh what a lovely piece. You have the power to express so beautifully. Thank you for sharing. *Peace.

RAM
Member

since 2000-03-24

Posts 153

9 posted 2000-05-25 11:22 AM

thanks, Spitfire

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