Open Poetry #7 |
Mantra Transformed |
RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
Mantra Transformed Pulling you in with each deep breath. Slowly, I release a sigh - a sigh that is your name. Feeling you flow with each fresh pulse. Softly, I whisper in peace - the peace that is your name. Freely you stream through each blessed cell. Swiftly, I succumb to rush - a rush that lives your name... Corinne. © RAM 5/17/00 |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
That was beautiful, very tranquil. I am sure Corinne will be honoured by your mantra. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Yepr! I echo brian totally. Beautifully penned. Parker |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Oh, RAM, I'm speechless. Thank you (blushing furiously). Corinne |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
this was a wonderful poem..very peaceful and breathtaking... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RAM~ Tee - Hee The *blush* becomes her, does it not? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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LadySofia Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 238FL., USA |
RAM my friend, what a compelling piece. Gives me shivers all over! ^_^ LadySofia That time of year thou mayst in me behold, When yellow leaves, or none, or few, do hang, Upon those boughs which shake against the cold, Bare ruined choirs where late the sweet birds sang. In me thou see'st the twilight of such day, As after sunset fadeth in the west, Which by-and-by black night doth take away, Death's second self that seals up all in rest. In me thou see'st the glowing of such fire, That on the ashes of his youth doth lie, As the deathbed whereon it must expire, Consumed with that which it was nourished by. This thou perciev'st, which makes thy love more strong, To love that well which thou must leave ere long. William Shakespeare |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
thank you brian and Parker de nada, Corinne. thank YOU thanks, dhuron Marge, that it does. Thanks, LadySofia. shivers are good, especially when it's near 100 outside. Rick |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~RAM,...oh what a lovely piece. You have the power to express so beautifully. Thank you for sharing. *Peace. |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
thanks, Spitfire |
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