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Destiny Train
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Destiny Train |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
DESTINY TRAIN CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHOO! CHOO! I feel the train rolling down the track Screeching wheels and people standing back CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! TOOT! TOOT! The whistle blows a steam engine's laughter! All aboard! For happily ever after CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHOO! CHOO! I miss my love and I want her back Longing for her love on this endless track CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHOO! CHOO! A golden ring echoes her name This mighty engine, my destiny train CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHOO! CHOO! A million miles of plains and tunneled mountains My heart pumps fresh as spring feed fountains CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHOO! CHOO! A thousand towns passed along the way My love grows stronger each and everyday CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! TOOT! TOOT! The whistle blows as the mighty train slows My love is waiting, the purest winter rose CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHOO! CHOO! She said I do and I said the same Happily ever after on the destiny train |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Ok,...I loved reading this!!! Destiny train,...how great  I saw your name out there in the list and remembered a poem you did a while back titled Hairball...heehee..I knew this one would be great too. *Peace. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is an excellent poem!! I love the idea that destiny is a train going down the tracks of our lives. . . it's a great metaphor!! Great poem!! ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
very good, what can I say but chuga chuga. choo choo choo. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
SpitFire…Thanks very much. Did you get a chance to read…? THE GAME…..You might find that interesting, it's on the 8th page from this post. Respond if you like. WHEN YOU TALK YOU JUST DON'T SHUT UP…. You may get a laugh! It's on the 16th page from here. Sven… Thanks..could you feel the train rolling? Rosebud1229…Sounds like you're on the right track CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA!CHUGA! CHOO!CHOO! Tickets please! THANK YOU! Thank you all for taking a ride on the Destiny Train |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
I've always loved trains, and this is a great metephor of the love journey. Keep on engineering them..... a chuga chuga, chuga chuga, choo choo..... all aboard for happily ever after. First stop Passions. Parker |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I wish I could travel on that train, I get the train home every weekend and it is no way near as exciting or romantic as your poem. From now I on I am going to take the destiny train, even better than the love boat. lol < !signature--> ------------------------ "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams. "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto [This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 05-25-2000).] |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Haleyja…Those old steam engines seemed so powerful. Love is powerful. Brian madden…Trains can give you a lot of time to think about things or someone special in between the fast pace of our everyday lives. CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHOO! CHOO! Bless you! Bless you! LOL Next top passions Thank you all for taking a ride on the Destiny Train |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
how about one more ride, Engineer... all aboard. chuga chuga, choo choo... i'm losing it. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Haleyja…Excuse me sir…may I see your ticket please! I'm sorry this ticket has already been validated! You have to leave the train immediately….try for one of those haystacks. And I'm sorry but your Mama's ticket is expired too…. Hey stop lady! Don't run away!…Catch her someone!! You !!…. Baggage handler!!! Grab her!!! Throw Mama from the train!!! Thanks for taking a ride on the Destiny Train (Don't worry we didn't throw Mama from the train, Mama was in love. So we gave her a tall hat and let Mama drive the Destiny train.) TOOT! TOOT! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! LOL…(Lots of love) |
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