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Ethan Halo
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on the roof again

0 posted 2000-05-23 09:01 PM



lonely now

We used to spend the day in bed;
rub our feet together 'cause the blanket was too short.
let the phone ring; shut the door on the world.
you know,
i'd never had no reasons before
to ever doubt the look in your eye.
And now it's clear to both of us:
A wishing well for broken dreams
and if you make a wish,
you can hear the screams.

You said that it's over.
But we both know better.
You said that i don't love you.
But you don't remember...

you don't feel nothing.

We used to sneak in through your backgate
Hoping your parents wouldn't hear us.
We could stay up all night.
I can still hear you laugh...
Now it's a god-awful sound.
Oh, please remember...

You said that it's over.
But we both know better.
You said that i don't love you.
But you don't remember...

you don't feel nothing.
and i'm lonely now.


 We all got somethin' we need to atone for.

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Ethan Halo
Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793
on the roof again
1 posted 2000-05-23 09:24 PM


This is a little experiment of mine. it matches up with the first two verses of Matchbox 20's "kody". tell me what ya think...
Ethan Halo
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since 2000-04-28
Posts 793
on the roof again
2 posted 2000-09-29 02:26 AM


just testin the new signature....

I won't become as dumb as some and succumb to scum. It's cumbersome, I'm tryin to do well on this Earth, but it's been Hell on this Earth, since I fel

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