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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2000-05-23 05:52 PM


Little Verse

The magnificent splendor of soft petaled flower
Is gained through the dark dormant months in the ground
Perhaps my most splendid, magnificent hour
Will come through this darkness of sorrow’s surround

Elizabeth Santos

© Copyright 2000 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2000-05-23 06:10 PM


Elizabeth,
Simple and excellent. Love Sy

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-05-23 06:38 PM


Elizabeth, my friend~
I have no doubt of it.
Love you~
~*Marge*~


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Martie
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3 posted 2000-05-23 06:50 PM


Liz--even if your days are dark, your spirit shines bright...and sorrow does bring so many understandings.... Marge is right.
Denise
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4 posted 2000-05-23 09:25 PM


This little verse says so much, Elizabeth. This is so touching. It is so true...sorrow and hardship do have a way of bringing us to refinement. Here's a HUG for you through it all.

Denise

Cerenity
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5 posted 2000-05-24 09:30 PM


Hi Liz,

Wonderful poem my dear, and sending you a BIG HUG and Prayers your way.

Love, Cerenity

Balladeer
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6 posted 2000-05-24 11:26 PM


Liz, there is no "little" verse as far as you are concerned....and this one is no exception.
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