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Bride to her Beloved..........#3 in vampire series
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Bride to her Beloved..........#3 in vampire series |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Bride to her Beloved He was the dark magic maker A mere once mortal man Traveled through hell’s half acre To make her his queen, now damned His constant companion and lover Reborn by him to darkness So many secrets to uncover His gift given, no less Love be their conviction In discovery of Heaven and Hell A future beyond prediction Knowledge through his death knell She rouses through birth pangs Flawless and perfect, in every way Hungering, to use new firm fangs Alas, but soon the light of day Her mortal body dead and gone Now she slumbers in coffin Glimpsed, her last break of dawn Sleep now, as he has done so often Awaken…….As the bride, to her beloved Marina May 2000 [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 05-23-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
so..I did tell you about that blind date LOL wow girl...you are really enjoying writing these arent you... it shows in the perfection of the piece... great goth and vampy imagery perfect rhyme too. more more... later-marina-gator jm Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Oh, Marina - sweet poetry - what a great theme --) Such fantastic writing. Enjoyed much. ~netswan |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Jan, you know I just couldn't keep my mouth shut about that blind date of yours! LOl But you blow it girl.....I told everyone that it was Gemini's fault!!! LOL Just another drunked night eh!!! Netswan, thank you I am glad you liked the theme and my writing. Marina |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent Marina, I really like what you've done with this series. . . please tell me that there's more. . . "Traveled through hell's half acre To make her his queen, now damned" Quite wonderful my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"He was the dark magic maker a mere once mortal man Traveled thru hell's half acre to make her his queen, now damned." This part reads so well..I would like to hear Vincent Price reading and dramatizing these words. I'd even settle for Orson Wells. James |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Hey Marina, I finally found it...hehe Very well written m'friend, Love these vampire pieces....i hope you keep 'em coming All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Thank you to all.......I had forgotten I had posted this. Just a little brain dead! Sven, thank you. I didn't know you liked my dark side so much.....i can't always be so sweet and innocent you know! James, that is so cool. i never thought about someone reading it with a creepy voice. Hey Sven you want to try it?? LOL Jeff, digging through the old again I see. Thank you my friend for finding this. I don't honestly know if I will continue the series......running out of ideas. Marina |
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