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svtcobra
Junior Member
since 2000-05-23
Posts 14
Syracuse,NY USA

0 posted 2000-05-23 01:28 AM


Classic beauty
long hair
mysterious eyes
sensuous lips

Shin deep
NO wish it was
make it easy
physical attraction

Deeper still
I WILL get hurt
I don't know

Leave him
thats the answer
figure it out
I AM HERE

Reality check
five years in
got no chance
move on now

© Copyright 2000 David J. Gassen - All Rights Reserved
Angelwings
Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222
IL, USA
1 posted 2000-05-23 01:37 AM


Wonderful portrayal of how hard it is to leave the things we love regardless of how dangerous or bad it is for us.  thanx for sharing with us.  Keep them coming
Cerenity
Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
2 posted 2000-05-24 08:31 AM


Hi svcobra,

OH boy yes reality can knock at your door when you really do not want it too can't it! But then sometimes we can just go on with life not really realizing that so much time has gone by and what do we have to show for it. Great thoughts here, thank you for the read.

Love,  Cerenity

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