Open Poetry #7 |
Test of a lifetime |
Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
Have you ever stopped and pondered why things occur as they do? Why often on a good day you receive bad news? Why when you really think you've done well you suddenly get told to go to hell? Why when you feel like you're on cloud nine you think life is going fine Someone so rudely puts you in your place? Is it to keep us in reality from going off on fantasies? Is it to keep us grounded here on earth? Or to remind us of true life? Does it really make us stronger that which does not kill? Or is it merely a test put here to keep us in our place? We go on taking each separate blow Never really stopping to cry or show the true hurt that we incur from the daily tests we endure. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Wonderful Poem ---just chalk full of thought provoking material and written cleverly. Oh, yes, have wondered many a time --) ~netswan |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
It's nice to know i'm not the only one wondering net swan thanx for reading my words and giving me compliments. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I like to ponder, too. Yes, are we being tested, and by whom? I liked it. Melton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AngelWings~ Interesting thoughts. All of life is a test ... I hope to pass with flying colors ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes of course....I think the struggles in life can build character, and strength and courage, and compassion. Each individuals determination determines who they will be. James |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
Thank you all for reading my poems and I'm glad I'm not the only person who wonders Good luck with all your writing. |
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