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Angelwings
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since 1999-08-27
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0 posted 2000-05-23 12:10 PM


Have you ever stopped and pondered
why things occur as they do?

Why often on a good day
you receive bad news?

Why when you really think you've done well
you suddenly get told to go to hell?

Why when you feel like you're on cloud nine
you think life is going fine
Someone so rudely puts you in your place?

Is it to keep us in reality
from going off on fantasies?

Is it to keep us grounded here on earth?
Or to remind us of true life?

Does it really make us stronger
that which does not kill?

Or is it merely a test
put here to keep us in our place?

We go on taking each separate blow
Never really stopping to cry or show
the true hurt that we incur
from the daily tests we endure.

© Copyright 2000 Chelsea Thompson - All Rights Reserved
netswan
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since 2000-03-28
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1 posted 2000-05-23 12:18 PM


Wonderful Poem ---just chalk full of thought
provoking material and written cleverly.

Oh, yes, have wondered many a time --)

~netswan

Angelwings
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2 posted 2000-05-23 01:52 AM


It's nice to know i'm not the only one wondering net swan   thanx for reading my words and giving me compliments.  I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
2dalimit
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3 posted 2000-05-23 06:59 AM


I like to ponder, too. Yes, are we being tested, and by whom?
I liked it.
Melton

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4 posted 2000-05-23 07:27 AM


AngelWings~
Interesting thoughts.
All of life is a test ...
I hope to pass with flying colors !  
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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JamesMichael
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5 posted 2000-05-23 06:28 PM


Yes of course....I think the struggles in life can build character, and strength and courage, and compassion.   Each individuals determination determines who they will be.  James
Angelwings
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6 posted 2000-05-23 08:18 PM


Thank you all for reading my poems and I'm glad I'm not the only person who wonders   Good luck with all your writing.
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