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*Harsh Realities*
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas 
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Harsh Reality loving and losing in love feeling your push become a shove knowing better than to completely fall sensing as you put up your wall always aware you will never return the love you recieve always knowing that you will decieve never expecting more than what we have always knowing committment is what you lack accepting these harsh terms of reality knowing that I'll become one of your casualties with all of this I still can't pull back my heart almost like I knew you were my heartache right from the start so I'll go on with these facts loving you because I'm in too deep now to know what else to do the reality of loving someone more than they do you HLB '99 |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
I sure did relate to this piece! You read my heart well in this one, while displaying yours! It is such a hard thing to deal with when you realize the one you're in love with isn't as much in love with you. *Hug* hope things get better for you. take care! amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Holly, this indeed has that painful realization that Amy spoke of just coming from every word. . . "accepting these harsh terms of reality knowing that I'll become one of your casualties with all of this I still can't pull back my heart almost like I knew you were my heartache right from the start" When you're in too deep. . . that's when it hurts the most. . . Excellent poem, my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh Holly,...this is so heartfelt. I feel the emotions bleed from your text. Well done here. *Hang in there. *Peace. |
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Cyndey Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84Arkansas |
oh holly... Sometimes I feel I know you too well my friend! I know what you mean excatly however you've expressed them utterly completely without question! All of your poetry is wonderful, but girl This one is just awesome! great meter, and rhyme... and not to mention the wonderful way you weave your imagery. Cyndey |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Beautiful Poem, Holly --- oh, how does one tell one to get out! That life is just too short to give and give and give more than your share. ~netswan |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
TO ALL--thanks for the sweet words. Yes, it truly is the harshest of realities to find you love more than the other person. Never a fun thing to find out. Cyndey--I consider this truly high praise coming from someone that writes like you! Thank you!! Spitfire--well you certainly read this one correct! My emotions were bleeding..I like how you worded that. Thanks! Sven--Too deep? OH YES! It not only hard to realize it when it happens..it's also very hard to walk from it, but we live and learn and with any luck...we also grow. I have a friend that says "constantly create-don't conform". I like that.  |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
You express your emotion so very well.... Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Beautiful, but sad poetry.Well done! Life IS too short. Sometimes you have to ask yourself.........???... Oh shoot, just keep writing and don't give up on LOVE! MBlue |
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Crystal Lynn Junior Member
since 2000-05-21
Posts 18Miami, FL. USA |
you totally hit it right in the bulls eye about loving someone else and not gettin in return..great poem keep up the creativeness |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
feel the pain, oh man. so heartfelt that I could even see some of my bad relationships in this. feel for you, great poem though. P. J. Kotrch |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Holly, the expressions you write are so deeply felt This is great writing Cocobaci |
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