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So In Love
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So In Love |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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So in Love Amy M. Kennedy ~guys i got it bad lol! hope you all like this one. Shining stars overheard sparkle from high above Willow trees dance to the music which only we can hear Holding you tight in my arms, so completely in love You look into my eyes, our bodies so near Summer nights long and full of such heat You run your fingers through my hair Our lips finally entwine in tender passion as they meet Suddenly I feel free, and haven't a single care Ahh the sound of love, messages from our hearts You whisper your love, as I whisper mine too Then the true Passion starts Liquid fire goes through my body, as you say "I love you" Your love is so sweet, I get so weak at just the thought of you and me Under the moon we dance together Eyes so blue is all that I can see As we whisper the beautiful words of forever. "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Yep, sounds like you really do have it bad! LOL You go girl!  A well-written beautiful piece, but then again love is always beautiful to write about Hey, maybe he's "the one."Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
hahaha Amy, yep you got it bad -----ENJOY This is a beautiful poem, Amy, I just love it. ~netswan |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you got it bad but this poem is WAY GOOD!! amy-girl this is awesome, your writing is growing by leaps and bounds. this is excellent, the rhyme is so great and the imagery is as well this is one of my fav pieces by you. more more more  jm Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Shining stars overhead sparkle from high above Willow trees dance to the music only we can hear." Sounds like a wonderful romantic experience...now forget about this computer for awhile and enjoy the beauty of love. James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I liked it a lot!!!!! Nice poem!!!!!! |
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