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gnosis
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 12


0 posted 2000-05-22 01:22 PM


this is lyrics for a song by my band gnosis

(so i) tried to get inside
(tried) to work my way in)
tried to bring it all down
cover up all within

(now i'm) looking for something
(somewhere) in shattered remains
now i've brought it all down
(and i) can't erase the stains

it's so slowly decayed
still can't tell what's been frayed
something so long delayed
could never have been saved
(or so i thought)

(so i've) put it back together
(but) nothing seems to fit
we're in this together
(but i) still can't deal with all this sh*t

the void has been filled with a hole
my death has been killed by my soul
i just need to get out




[This message has been edited by gnosis (edited 05-22-2000).]

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doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
1 posted 2000-05-22 01:34 PM


great poem, kiddo... full of emotion and imagery ... but i would expect nothing less from you

now get back to work! hehe  
luv, mom

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