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time to move on |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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time to move on amy m kennedy days of yesterday are long gone its time to move on time keeps ticking, another day passes its time to move on fond memories of the past the good times will always last new doors opening, a new beginning for me the best is yet to come, that i believe another day passes as the sun sets low its time to move on no need to look back at what ifs and should haves as its time to move on cherish each day, is what i try to do another chapter of my life comes to a sweet close i am not sad that yesterday is not here for tomorrow holds something dear its time to move on. ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Ardonida Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 76 |
Hi there, I am no expert, but this reads so well, you ever thought of making this into a song? It just rolls off yur thoughts so easily!! A. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wisdom in poetic form...very good Amy.  |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
There is a sense of sadness in this but your words are so true - "tomorrow holds something dear". Always look ahead, Amy, there is much to look forward to. Michael |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Wise words, I always believe that you not live in the past only the present. "cherish each day, is what i try to do another chapter of my life comes to a sweet close i am not sad that yesterday is not here for tomorrow holds something dear" A lovely image, a fantastic poem, flows wonderfully. |
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Lone Ranger Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92Salvador , Bahia , Brazil |
It's time to move on... If only this words could get in my mind... Great poem, really like your style... "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free It was always thus and always thus will be" Prof. Keating Dead Poets Society |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amy~ You are moving on and have much awaiting you. You will tackle life with an attitude that puts others at ease. May all of your tomorrows be filled with hopes, desires and goals of successful attainment. Love you, young lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
PERFECT SUNSHINE!!! and your tomorrows are gonna be awesome... hit the ground running Amy-girl... the skys the limit with your positive outlook. great writing here. me loves ya! jm Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
thanks so much you guys for your sweet and encouraging replies. i wrote this when i was feeling kinda sad and happy at the same time. its a bit of a confusing time in my life as a major part of my life has closed (my formal education). what lies ahead of me is both scary and exciting at the same time. i am also growing as a person in many ways and all the challenges are somewhat overwhelming. i am forever grateful that i can put all my emotions to paper and that i have such wonderful, talented, and compassionate people to share it with. you all make up the best of the best!! all my love, amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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