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What Does Gina Want? Not me.
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What Does Gina Want? Not me. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
What does Gina Want? I want to Love you forever. We could spend endless hours together enjoying every moment of pleasure. I want to kiss passion filled lips as I feel the curves I admire within my anxious fingertips. I want to spend every evening together especially since I like you more than all others. Its nice to have someone so sexy and revealing to awaken all my desires and feelings. I want a relationship that is real full of hugs and kisses I can feel. Your hair, your face, and your body seem to be so warm an surreal. I want to sleep with our legs interwoven together. Oh how I desire to spend each night in your arms feeling the magic of every slice of your feminine charms. Awakening refreshed each morning again to start all over where passion begins. To touch and feel each and every curve as your precious body calms all of my nerves. Then all of a sudden this thought came to my mind.. and I find myself saying...What does Gina want? Jameslee@May19,2000 originallyOctober19,1994 Shedidn'twantme Iwasnotherideal Notasoulmate |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is...astonishing in its forthright misery. The imagery is not in itself of loss - but it just underlies it...the loss is pervasive. I think you have done so well on this...  yes, sadly well done. |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
I can almost see hopes being dashed and dreams being broken. This is full of a sad tone, but such good, expressive writing. Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Ohhh, this one you've shared is quite amazing and I found it most captivating right till the end verse where one is left pondering .. what does the other want  CocoBaci |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Oh James, I am so sorry to read this( I mean I loved the poem)but I was hoping things would work out. Hugs, Marina |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
This poem is so great, yet so very sad I hope the situation improves somehow, I hate to see you in such a bad place. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Excuse me sir,..if I don't say so myself,...this is an astounding expression....great writing. Thanks for sharing. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Severn, Lori, Coco, Marina, Mistikman, and Spitfire for your nice comments. It's sad but true I fell madly in Love with Gina and her final answer was "I'm not in Love with you." A five year relationship that has gone bad. It is no longer Gina and James...it is Gina and Loyd..her guitar instructor. Marina I want to clear this up for you...all the names sound alike. Tina is my waitress friend who recently was married. Gina was much more to me but will now be much less. Lena is less but hopefully she will soon be much more in my life. At one time I wanted to get back together with Gina..but now I only want her to leave me alone...when the phone rings I hope it is not her....I want to go on with my life and she is not in my plans, my hopes, and my dreams. James |
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