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~Bridge Of Love~
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~Bridge Of Love~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
~Bridge of Love~ Hold a memory ... touch a photograph ... this love still remains ... golden engraved epitaph. A bridge to be built ... to cross to the other side ... on either shore an angel waits ... arms open wide. To kiss sweet fate ... to dance with destiny, On a wing and prayer ... a soul to set free. Winds of change ... sands of time, hear this prayer ... read this rhyme. Always here ... see me where in I stand ... hand held out ... heart in hand. Janet Marie for DeVante, with love always Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Wow Janet you never fail to write something beautiful that steals my breath everytime. STUNNING. I am in awe...may I stand in your shadow? [This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 05-20-2000).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Janet Marie,...I believe this poem to be picturesque. Wonderful writing. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lovely poem, Janet Marie and I enjoyed the format...can be read in so many ways. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
janet-- im back and with a vengeance lol. this was awesome! i loved the format u used and the words captured so much at once. your writing always captivates my attention and holds it there long after i've read your poem. thanks for sharing! love ya, Amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Janet Marie, Simply beautiful!! The end is just perfect!! Wonderful romantic piece. LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
Wow, this was awesome Jan... such a beatiful vision with so few words. Love ya! --Dave "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment. Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
No muse, huh? Lovely work Janet Marie! sweet as kisses... |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Janet, This was beautiful, so heartfelt and emotional! You really took me for a ride, I just sat back and enjoyed every word. Great poem! David2 |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JanetMarie~ A lovely crossing ... I like the format and the tender content. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Oooh, JM...I'm the one who has the poet's envy....this is romantic, beautiful, and filled with love. I am in awe of your talent. *Krista Knutson* ~We are only truly lost when we have lost ourselves~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Janet Marie~ Very tenderly and warmly written. Such talent you possess Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
WOW Jan, such emotion in so few words Lovely read All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Yeah... what they said Wow.... loved the end too. too cool. Parker |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
"Always here ... see me where in I stand ... hand held out ... heart in hand." Great work Janet, as usual. Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Oh, this poem is absolutely lovely! Very poignant and hauntingly sad, and exquisitely beautiful. Wonderful imagery! I want to keep a copy, to enjoy for years to come. I'll be sure to keep your name with it. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
THANK YOU ALL...SO VERY MUCH!!! you have no idea how healing, inspiring, and wonderful your heartfelt replies to my work is for my heart and soul. I adore you all. take care sweet poet friends ... Janet Marie Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
~~~A perfect "10" on my gator score card~~~ A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Nice poem, but to me it seemed kind of sad. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
BEG, you know i like you on top....hehe ~~up you go~~ i picked this icon because of it's number.. LOL A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
J.M. oh sweet sister this is so beautiful and amazing and so full of your heart!! The rhyme the message and most of all the soul put into this makes it perfection!! **Angel Wing Hugs** |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
JM-each time I thing you've written something you'll have trouble topping, along comes something like this...this touched deeper than most. Thanks jwesley |
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