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Untill there was you
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Untill there was you |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Untill there was you, filled my heart with happiness, Untill there was you, you made me to love you, you showed me how much there is a love for me, Untill there was you, you taught how to stand and face the world alone, when you're not around with me, Untill there was you , There were times, you showed me world, The world with love and tenderness, Untill there was you, I was happy , Now you're gone away, I can't believe you're not here to hold me, Untill there was you, There was everthing, Untill there was you, |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
vandana my friend, this poem just aches with longing and sadness. . . truly speaks to the feelings that we get when someone we love leaves. . . an excellent poem. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Your poem has touched my heart CocoBaci |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Until there was you, There was everthing, Until there was you... Beautifully expressed, Vandana. How sad one feels when someone close leaves ... Regards, Sudhir Life is like a painting, That in an art gallery is left hanging, Though many come just to look at it, A very few actually come to enjoy it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ Sweet longing sentiments. You okay ? Love ya, gal. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
vandana, I have to agree with everyone's comments, you poem echoes heartache and loss That last three lines especially... Until there was you, There was everthing, Until there was you... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
vendana-- oh girl how i can relate this this one, sadly. this was a beautiful expression of your feelings tinged with much sadness and longing! but still beautifully written. keep writing hon, it does help us heal  take care, amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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