the migration of the birds 1

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the migration of the birds 1

rene
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since 2000-04-24

Posts 113

0 posted 2000-05-18 09:02 PM

hands cold as dawn again
molesting the grooves of my spine

fireflys boasted the night again
ugly and serene

lips full of lies again
red suffocating in the air

the revolt of the prisoners again
(they built a new society)

wounds as open as eyes again
purpose and the elite

mean nothing again

netswan
Senior Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 1369
Washington

1 posted 2000-05-19 12:29 PM

Rene - what a woeful sad tale.

netswan

rene
Member

since 2000-04-24

Posts 113

2 posted 2000-05-20 01:37 PM

thanks

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

3 posted 2000-05-20 06:38 PM

very dark, I love the concise nature of the poem, this one got me thinking.Great poem.

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