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Lonelypoet
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since 2000-05-10
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0 posted 2000-05-20 12:26 PM



  I've finally lost her,
there's no tomorrow for us,
there's only darkness now.
I will forever miss you,
I haven't said good-bye nor
shall I.
I will hold the bitterness
within like always.
I was never able to say I love
you because you've changed.
  Good-bye...my love...

(a repost from Dark Passions)

© Copyright 2000 Chris - All Rights Reserved
CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043

1 posted 2000-05-20 12:51 PM


This poem just seems to bring out the emotions you think have been put away.   The verse that I found most captivating is .. I was never able to say I love you because you have changed ..

Thanks for the great reading
CocoBaci

vandana
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since 1999-10-22
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2 posted 2000-05-20 04:35 PM


Nice poem.I like it very much.
A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2000-05-20 05:51 PM


This poem speaks to me as if I know you, you know me, I guess for now your still a mystery...

I know what you felt when writing this...great poem!

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