Open Poetry #7 |
Finding Me Again |
Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Time to search deep within Not sure where to begin Self analysis is the key Have to think hard to see What will eventually unfold The story has yet to be told I know the real me still exists Wanting freedom she insists Release from her self imposed cell Heal thyself and be well Sometimes I feel sad and down On my face I wear a frown That is not the real me Spend time with me and you'll see I am warm, gentle, and caring With you i don't mind sharing My innermost intimate feelings Could fill these rooms to their ceilings On the way to finding me again Thanks to the support of all my friends I see flashes of the old me If you'd look you would see She was really here all along Quietly singing her life's song Just have to say Thank You to Jeffrey for the title and challenge!! Couldn't have done it without you, m'friend!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Lone Wolf, Truly powerful words you've written here! We all need to find the real "ME" every now and then, and you have certainly done very well at that All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jeffrey, Thank you!! Yes, we do all need to find the real "me" ...hope to find even more in time. Great title, m'friend!! LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Lone Wolf...I can relate to this one very well. Sometimes you just need a little help to find the "real me" again. Take Care! Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Lone Wolf-- this was very touching and moving. its wonderful to see that you are finding the "real you" again. Very nice poem!! Amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Eagle One....it is an incredible journey. I know she is in there still. Amy....Thank you. Something that I just need to do....for me. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
I found myself once... it wasn't pretty. But I kinda like him now, I think he might even like me. Nice poem. Good luck finding yourself... remember to leave a note behind incase you get back before you return. =) --Dave "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment. Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Dave, I can't believe he wasn't pretty!! LOL. I am sure he does like you. Thank you!! So a note...not a trail? Let me know which is better!! LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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