Open Poetry #7 |
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Inbetween the lines |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA ![]() |
I planted stars, which FELL into my garden IN fields of dreams, i searched for LOVE AND I KEPT hope when faith has parted and walked ON muddy roads that led above and FALLING from the clouds onto pines i wrote my story in-between the lines "I will not whole die, my soul in sacred lyre, will outlive my dust and will escape decay, And in the moonlit sphere, my glory will not tire As long as poets still remain" A. Pushkin |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, Master! I love it! Just watch out for those landings! ![]() Denise |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Truely, inbetween the lines...well done! |
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Ardonida Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 76 |
Dear sir... NOW I know why you are a MASTER.... It is so easy to read between the lines when there is nothing to see, but when it is right there in front of you, you kinda dont wanne see it... It is such a lovely piece!! Adri |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Excellent poem! Most excellent! Corinne |
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