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Master
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since 1999-08-18
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0 posted 2000-05-19 12:31 PM


I planted stars, which FELL into my garden
IN fields of dreams, i searched for LOVE
AND I KEPT hope when faith has parted
and walked ON muddy roads that led above
and FALLING from the clouds onto pines
i wrote my story in-between the lines



 "I will not whole die, my soul in sacred lyre,
will outlive my dust and will escape decay,
And in the moonlit sphere, my glory will not tire
As long as poets still remain" A. Pushkin



© Copyright 2000 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-05-19 12:56 PM


Very good, Master! I love it! Just watch out for those landings!  

Denise

Sunshine
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2 posted 2000-05-19 05:09 PM


Truely, inbetween the lines...well done!
Ardonida
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since 2000-05-18
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3 posted 2000-05-19 05:28 PM


Dear sir...
NOW I know why you are a MASTER....
It is so easy to read between the lines when there is nothing to see, but when it is right there in front of you, you kinda dont wanne see it...
It is such a lovely piece!!
Adri

Corinne
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4 posted 2000-05-19 06:37 PM


Excellent poem!

Most excellent!

Corinne

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