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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2000-05-19 03:48 AM


Hairs on arm
reach in feather
static in magnetic
pull--
antennae
of my soul
in yearn--
every cell
in search of you.

I'll lay me down upon the stone.
I'll welcome this, my sacrifice;
to meet your eye in dark eclipse,
spread of wing to fly the night.

Virgin.  Mother.  And the Crone...
For you, High Priestess, sheds her robe...


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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
1 posted 2000-05-19 03:57 AM


Grand Indeed!!!

Regards, sudhir

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-05-19 07:43 AM


I'll lay me down upon the stone.
I'll welcome this, my sacrifice;
to meet your eye in dark eclipse,
spread of wing to fly the night.

Virgin.  Mother.  And the Crone...
For you, High Priestess, sheds her robe...
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oooohhhhh
lovely, lovely
do so love disrobing and sacrifice
mmm mmm mmm
love this gem
sleep is such a waste of poetry time  
later me sweetness
jm

bobbycat
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since 2000-02-06
Posts 233
USA
3 posted 2000-05-19 02:23 PM


Beautiful poem....I knew Diana was smiling down brightly on someone last night. This was wonderful; Blessed Be.  

Christina =^..^=

Sven
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East Lansing, MI USA
4 posted 2000-05-19 07:02 PM


I too, could feel the power of Diana in the storm and in the air. . . a grand poem my friend. . .

The rite begins. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

5 posted 2000-05-19 11:31 PM


Much gratitude to all as always, and bobbycat would also love to correspond with you---e mail me if interested---(I do so love finding my people!)  Another moon glow to bask in tonight....now where's that broom?  lol....
Parker
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129
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6 posted 2000-05-20 01:54 AM


Alrighty then.... serenity I didn't know you were into stone sacrificial rites. Where did I put my druids robe, darn I'll just have to go robeless if thats ok by you. Why am I asking you, like your the sacrifice. Where did I put my symbolic knife......  
spiked
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA
7 posted 2000-05-20 02:00 AM


This is beautiful.
you have helped me shed that
tear I wrote of.
Thank you

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

8 posted 2000-05-20 02:59 AM


Parker--you are so naughty I just gotta love
        ya!  And I can't believe you'd have
        trouble finding anything, however
        symbolic...

spiked--Don't gotta love ya, just do. Thanks.

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