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Scorpio Moon
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Scorpio Moon |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Brushed by feather (eagles' wing) this night--an omen in the sky. A candle--red--a puddle now (I light the blue one in its stead.) Scorpio Moon is on the rise, and I'm amazed my cheeks are dry. No mystery do I ponder (even Goddess sleeps tonight) shadows of this lunacy twisting words in eagle's flight. Transformation holds my gaze (with no regret for sting of tail) Penning words by candlelight I'll be content to know each night... this dreaded orb is on the wane. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Scorpio Moon is on the rise, and I'm amazed my cheeks are dry. No mystery do I ponder (even Goddess sleeps tonight) shadows of this lunacy twisting words in eagle's flight. ---------- Penning words by candlelight I'll be content to know each night... this dreaded orb is on the wane ------------- ooh girl...love ya when your cryptic, mystic and celestial. this is very cool. Ill e-you in morn about us singing a tune together...very cool  say good nite me'twin... ONE of us has to SLEEP at night LOL and it aint gonna be you. *smile* jm |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
Good stuff. you aren't by any chance wiccan are ya? i am, and this made me think it was half poem, half prayer. it's real good; real descriptive. you've got a good talent for imagery. i dig it. and the part: "and I'm amazed my cheeks are dry." very mysterious. something hiding in the wings. like i said, i dig it. We all got somethin' we need to atone for. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
And a Merry Meet to you m'friend...Thank you for your kind reply... (More solitary eclectic, Wiccan-centered, but embrace the truth where ever I find it...) Feel free to e mail me...I do so love to swap philosophy.... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ I like it when that moon captures everyone's fancy .... good show ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Very nice serenity ... glad to see your writing drifting in a cheerier current  Rex |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I like the title and your writing! ~~very nice~~ |
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Cyndey Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84Arkansas |
beautiful words and expressive thoughts... Beautiful poem... Cyndey |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
magically and beautiful just like a full moon in a clear night sky. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
My thanks to all once again...you keep me goin' y'do....and yes, 'tis a strange moon this month....Love to you all. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Very well written ....love the mystery of it All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is a beautiful poem, serenity. I loved every bit of it... Regards, sudhir Life is like a painting, That in an art gallery is left hanging, Though many come just to look at it, A very few actually come to enjoy it. |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
"solitary-eclectic"...I like that. I do have to agree with Ethan: "and I'm amazed my cheeks are dry" is indeed an amazing line. Your poetry speaks volumes; I, too, have known nights like this. Beautiful poem. Christina =^..^= |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Really, this is one of the best I've read in a long while |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
serenity you have broken new ground again ever expanding the direction you write. Thankx |
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